It comes over you in an instant,
The flash is as quick as lightning.
You are smiling, then it is gone.
Your eyes are lost, and the anger grows
You become taller, bigger almost bloated
Not seeing or hearing a single thing or person around you
People are shouting at you
Trying to calm you,
Nothing will get in your way
Not him, your best mate,
Not her, your life long friend
Not me!
It is like you have been taken
The devil…
Has suddenly overtaken you
He has become you
And all you can see is red
You will not stop
Till the person in your path has had what is coming
You need to hit out, you need to fight
You will hit anyone in your way
The devil red has overtaken
There is on outburst
A firework is lite
And it is an almighty bang
Then the devil is gone.
The red has disappeared
You can see again
Your eyes are back, you can hear
The devil has departed…
Until next time!
This post was written for Josie’s Writing Workshop I choose prompt number 4. Red
– Something this colour inspires in you.
Please go and look at some of the other posts as well.
And Then All I Thought About Was You 
Nov 19, 2010 @ 00:24:13
fabulous,
I love the flow and your word choices,
Thanks for sharing…
attend my poets rally week 33 if you wish,
I would love to have you share your talent with fellow poets.
cheers!
Nov 19, 2010 @ 08:57:56
Oh thank you I will do that, thanks xx
Nov 19, 2010 @ 08:57:06
wow!!
some poem :O excellent write 🙂
Nov 19, 2010 @ 08:58:11
Thank you thats so kind xx
Nov 19, 2010 @ 16:33:40
I remember when my son was like this: red. Now, he is more of a yellow boy. I never would have guessed three years ago the nine-year-old he has become. Life changing.
Your words, so potent and gripping. I am glad I found you through the Poets Rally today.
Nov 20, 2010 @ 09:59:02
Thank you, that is so kind of you xx
Nov 21, 2010 @ 06:14:41
damn, I know that guy….
http://ukeepwalkingforward.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/see-me/
Nov 21, 2010 @ 07:38:49
Lol x
Nov 22, 2010 @ 03:23:15
enjoyable and entertaining
Nov 24, 2010 @ 19:53:01
Thank you xx
Nov 22, 2010 @ 11:18:38
mmm, i realized at the end of reading that i had stopped breathing 🙂 i’d say that’s a good sign about this poem. really enjoyed it!
Nov 24, 2010 @ 19:52:49
Thank you I am glad you liked it xx